Eye in the Sky Scene 1 Shot log

                               Eye in the Sky Scene 1 Shot log

Production name	Galaxis
Director	Shane Brocklehurst	Date	24/04/13,  26/05/13 and 08/05/13
Camera Operator	Shane Brocklehurst	Location	Manshead Upper School, B Block, Corridor and Locker area

Scene	Take	Duration	Description	Quality of video (1=good, 3= poor)	Quality of audio (1=good, 3= poor)	Usable (yes/no)	Notes
1B Pt.1a (00303)	1	0:07	This is the beginning of Scene 1B where Armendariz (Hit man) is hacking in to the computer mainframe.	2	2	Yes	This scene was accurately filmed and I thought was quite an effective technique of opening a scene as it showed the perspective of the character. The mise en scene looked like an actual computer room and the audio of the keyboard was quite clear which made this scene look dramatic.
1B Pt.1b (00305)	2	0:09		1	2	Yes	This was practically the same as the first where the position of the camera made the sequence look dramatic within the character, audio of keyboard and the mise en scene while filmed in a medium shot (MS).
1B Pt.2a (00306)	1	0:06	This is the second part of Scene 1B showing the perspective of Armendariz hacking the computer mainframe.	1	2	Yes	This scene looked quite dramatic as it showed the perspective of the character and his actions at hacking the computer mainframe. The audio of the keyboard and the mise en scene created the theme of a crime thriller which made the sequence look dramatic.
1B Pt.2b (00307)	2	0:06		2	2	Yes	This scene also look dramatic as the camera position showed the perspective and the actions of the hit man which made the scene look dramatic along with the sounds of him typing on the key board. Although yes this scene is usable but to me I do not think is has a good standard than the first take.
1B Pt.3a (00309)	1	0:06	This is the third part where the Facility Security Guard points a pistol at the Armendariz’s head.	2	2	No	This scene looked quite dramatic to start off with but Facility Security Guard pointed the gun at the Hit man’s head to quickly and the dialogue of the character sounded it was rushed which made the scene look unprofessional to include in the programme.
1B Pt.3b (00310)	2	0:07		1	2	Yes	This scene looked much better than the first take as not only it showed a good perspective of Armendariz hacking the computer it showed the first good introduction of the Facility Security Guard which highlighted his serious personality within his slow tone of voice which made it understandable and therefore was definitely usable.
1B Pt.4a (00147)	1	0:07	This is the fourth part where Armendariz turns and faces the Facility Security Guard.	1	2	Yes	This scene was perfectly filmed which presented the mise en scene of the computer mainframe and the setting along with the green screen displayed on the computer. The scene however illustrated the real character of Armendariz introducing him as a dark confident villain. The part where the hit man sighs is clear but he spoke quite fast, at least he said each word clearly making the character stand out in the scene.
1B Pt.4b (00150)	2	0:06		1	2	Yes	This scene was more improved than the first take as it showed the setting of the scene perfectly making the scene look dramatic. The audio of the character was much better as he spoke slowly and clearly making him sound more effective which illustrated the personality of the character.
1B Pt.5a (00152)	1	0:03	This is when Armendariz speaks back to the Facility Security Guard	2	2	Yes	This scene was quite effective as it showed the perspective of the Facility Security Guard receiving the comment from the Hit man. Armendariz on the other hand was also presented his personality that looked effective within his posture with the gun pointed at his head and how he spoke.
1B Pt.5b (00153)	2	0:03		2	2	Yes	This scene was very much similar to the first take as it presented the personality and perspective of both characters which again made the sequence look dramatic.
1B Pt.6a (00154)	1	0:03	This is where the Facility Security Guard replies to first comment of Armendariz	2	2	Yes	This scene was effective as it focused on the perspective of the Facility Security Guard which introduced his personality along with his clear dialogue which was understandable and looked quite dramatic
1B Pt.6b (00155)	2	0:04		2	2	Yes	This was the second take which is usable but not as effective as the first take as the camera slightly moves out of place towards the end. The scene is still usable as it presents the perspective and the personality of the Facility Security Guard effectively.
1B Pt.7a (00156)	1	0:03	This is the seventh scene where Zharkov (Antagonist) points his pistol to the Facility Security Guard’s head.	1	2	Yes	This scene was quite effective as focused on the perspective of the Facility Security Guard getting a gun pointed to his head by the antagonist which creates that dramatic theme. This also illustrates the personality of the antagonist which makes the individual look threating and powerful.
1B Pt.7b (00158)	2	0:04		2	2	No	This scene does has the similar characteristics than the first take but does not make the antagonist look threatening as he is smirking.
1B Pt.8a (00165)	1	0:05	This is when the Facility Security Guard slowly turns to face the Antagonist pointing a gun at him	2	2	No	This scene is quite effective from the angle it is being filmed from as it shows a link of the antagonist pointing a gun at the Facility Security Guard and the gun being pointed at the Hit man. The scene looks dramatic when the Facility Security Guard turns his head slowly which he does to face Zharkov. However the problem here is that when the Facility Security Guard turns his head he turns his half his body around where he points the gun away from Armenariz.
1B Pt.8b (00166)	2	0:04		2	2	No	This scene is basically the same as the first take meaning we have the re-film the sequence again.
1B Pt.9a (00)	1	0:03	This is the ninth scene where the antagonist responds to the Facility Security Guard after he turns around to face him.	1	1	Yes	This is was the first take and the most effective as it showed the perspective and the personality of the antagonist as a dark character expressed from his posture, facial expression and his tone of voice which made the scene look quite dramatic that relate to the theme/ setting and the genre of the programme.
1B Pt.9b (00)	2	0:03		2	2	No	This scene was not really effective as the antagonist was smirking and his tone of voice sounded less threating and dark.
1B Pt.9c (00)	3	0:03		2	2	No	The third take was basically the same for the second take as the personality of the character was not that dark to suit the characteristics of the individual.
1B Pt.10a (00)	1		This is the scene where the Antagonise shoots and kills the Facility Security Guard.	3	3	No	There were two main problems with this scene. When the Antagonist shot the Facility Security Guard he did not perform the recoil of pistol properly and that he blinked and slightly jumped when he pulled the trigger. Secondly the Facility Security Guard did not properly act when he got shot as he was not facing the gun and that he did not fall down correctly.
1B Pt.10b (00)	2			3	3	No	Take 2 of this scene was practically the same as take 1. This time the Antagonist was standing to close to the Facility Security Guard and that he did not perform the recoil of the gun correctly. Again the Facility Security Guard did not perform his death properly as he just dropped to the floor. Basically we have to re-film this sequence again.
1B Pt.11a (00005)	1	0:04	This is when Armendariz responds to Zharkov after killing the Facility Security Guard.	2	2	No	The audio and the mise en scene was the most effective elements in this scene but the antagonist who was holding the gun kept moving it and was pointing it in the  which made the scene look quite unrealistic and unprofessional.
1B Pt.11b (00009)	2	0:03		2	3	Yes	This take was much better as it clearly showed the perspective of the antagonist after killing the Facility Security Guard and this time he was pointing the gun in front of him keeping it still accurately which was effective when the hit man was talking directly to him. Again this perfectly showed the personality of the hit man which suited the theme as presented from the mise en scene.
1B Pt.12a (00013)	1	0:06	This is when Zharkov responds to the comment of Armendariz relating to the preparation of the computer mainframe.	2	2	No	The scene was professionally established at focusing on the perspective of Zharkov and the mise en scene. However the character was slightly high pitched which did not suit the personality of the antagonist accurately.
1B Pt.12b (00015)	2	0:05		1	1	Yes	This take was perfectly executed as not only it focused on the perspective of Zharkov it was a good introduction to his dialogue which presented his personality with a darker voice tone which suited the theme of the sequence.
1B Pt.13a (00017)	1	0:10	This was when Zharkov walks towards the computer console and places his gun on the desk whilst Armendariz was speaking to him	1	1	Yes	This scene was accurately filmed as the pan followed the movements of Zharkov when he was walking towards the console to drop his gun which made the scene look dramatic when he was using interactive body gestures. This scene also looked effective when the Hit man was talking to Zharkov which sounded understandable.
1B Pt.13b (00019)	2	0:10		2	3	No	This scene was not accurately performed as Armendariz said his lines too late and which made it look like the movements of Zharkov were delayed which made the scene look quite unprofessional.
1B Pt.13c (00020)	3	0:06		2	3	No	This was the same as the second take where this time there was problems with the audio of the beginning at the portraying of the characters looked like it was rushed.
1B Pt.14a (00021)	1	0:04	This was a CU of Zharkov placing his pistol on the desk beside the console. However this was an additional sequence which we may or not include in the crime drama.	2	2	Yes	This scene looked quite effective as it showed the weapon that the antagonist used which expressed his perspective and his personality which went well with the mise en scene that related towards the genre of the programme.
1B Pt.14b (00022)	2	0:04		3	2	No	This scene resembles the cinematic characteristics of the first take but it looked like it was rushed as the antagonist dropped the gun of the desk to quickly which made unprofessional.
1B Pt.15a (00026)	1	0:07	This is when Zharkov makes his remark relating towards his cyber-criminal operation and then begins to hack the computer console to gain access to the satellite weapon.	1	2	Yes	This scene was professionally filmed as it showed the perspective of the Antagonist making his remark and then hacking the computer which was effective as he managed to say the line in a dark tone representing his evil side. The scene also showed the character of Armendariz when he was receiving the comment made by Zharkov.
1B Pt.15b (00028)	2	0:09		2	3	No	This scene was similar to the first take as it was professional filmed which presented the perspective of the characters and their actions. However the only problem in this scene was that the voice tone of Zharkov sounded sarcastic which made his character look soft and did not suit the personality of the villain
1B Pt.16a (00183)	1	0:04	This was the first shot/angle of Zharkov using the computer to hack in to the satellite weapon	2	2	Yes	This scene was professionally accomplished as it showed a MS of Zharkov hacking the computer which presented his villainous character along with the perspective of Armendariz. The mise en scene and the sounds of the machinery also made the sequence quite dramatic
1B Pt.16b (00185)	2	0:04		2	3	No	This scene was very much like the first take but the background noise of the camera interfered with the ending making it not usable.
1B Pt.17 (00186)	1	0:04	This is second shot/ angle of Zharkov using the computer to hack in to the satellite weapon	2	2	Yes	This was the only take we did as it was filmed professionally the first time where the sequence was filmed in a MCU which showed the pure evil perspective of the Antagonist hacking in to the computer which represented his villainous side which perfectly blended with the mise en scene with Armendariz overlooking.
1B Pt.18a (00187)	1	0:07	This is when Zharkov completed the stage of gaining access to the satellite weapon and then gives Armendariz an order to call the helicopter and assemble the team	1	1	Yes	This was brilliant scene we filmed as it had dramatic and realistic cinematic features from the shot/ angle it was filmed, the mise en scene of the room and how the characters were portrayed. Zharkov had a great serious dark voice tone which illustrated his personality as well as his actions at hacking the computer. Armendariz also had a dark character of the way he was interacting and responding to the order received to him from Zharkov.
1B Pt.18b (00188)	2	0:06		2	2	No	This basically had the same filming and character portraying characteristics than the first take. The only problem was that Zharkov sounded less serious and was quite rushed which did not represent his villainous personality.
1B Pt.18c (00189)	3	0:05		2	2	No	The elements of this sequences was practically similar to the second take which was definitely not usable.
1B Pt.19a (00190)	1	0:09	This is when Zharkov gives Armendariz a second order.	1	1	Yes	This scene was filmed the first time outstandingly where the camera shot/ angle was effective as it was filmed in a MCU which showed the perspective of the two characters perfectly. The body language and the dialogue of Zharkov was serious and dark which illustrated his personality and the actions of Armendariz was also compelling which made the sequence dramatic along with the mise en scene.
1B Pt.19b (00197)	2	0:08		2	2	No	This scene has the similar cinematic characterises to the first take but the only problem was that the camera position was incorrect as it was to close towards the back of Zharkov only showing a small portion of the two characters in the scene.
1B Pt.19c (00198)	3	0:08		2	2	No	This scene was just like the second take where this time the dialogue of Zharkov was rushed which did not represent his villainous character.
1B Pt.20a (00201)	1	0:06	This is when Armendariz uses his smart phone to call in the helicopter.	2	3	No	The filming and the cinematic were excellent as it the camera was in a MCU shot/ angle and followed the movements of Armendariz whilst panning. The body language and the actions of the hit man were perfect but the dialogue of the individual was not effective which did not represent his personality correctly.
1B Pt.20b (00202)	2	0:05		1	2	Yes	The filming and cinematic features were exactly the same as the second take which was brilliant. The body language and movements of Armendariz were much better and his dialogue was serious which illustrated his character and made the scene dramatic than before.
1B Pt.21 (00213)	1	0:06	This is when Armendariz uses his smart phone to assemble the team	1	2	Yes	This scene was the only scene that we managed to film correctly where it was filmed in a MCU shot/ angle which focused on the perspective of the hit man along with the mise en scene in the background. The scene was also effective as the dialogue of Armendariz sounded serious which illustrated his character as a close associate to Zharkov.
1B Pt.22a (00215)	1	0:04	This is when Armendariz conceals his smart phone and turns around to inform Zharkov about the helicopter’s arrival.	2	2	No	This scene was filmed in the correct position but unfortunately Armendariz was looking straight at the camera which did not make the scene look realistic.
1B Pt.22b (00216)	2	0:04		1	1	Yes	This scene was a major improvement as it was filmed in a MCU shot/ angle which focused on the movements and perspective of Armendariz which made the scene look realistic and that his voice was serious which highlighted his personality which made the scene look dramatic.
1B Pt.23a (00221) (2)	1	0:06	This was when Zharkov responds to Armendariz and orders him to collect the suitcase.	1	2	Yes	This scene was the only decent one as it was filmed in a MCU shot/angle which focused on his perspective which was quite effective against the mise en scene background. The voice of the Antagonist was dark and serious which reflected to his villainous character along with his body language.
1B Pt.24 (00223)	1	0:06	This is when Armendariz picks up the suitcase from the desk containing the on-board computer	2	2	Yes	This was only take as it was quite effective where it was filmed in a CU shot/angle which showed the suitcase in full view and presented the perspective of Armendariz collecting the suitcase which made the sequence look dramatic.
1B Pt.25 (00223)	1	0:04	This is when Armendariz walks towards Zharkov with the suitcase in his hand	2	2	Yes	This was the only take we did which was perfectly established where it was filmed in LS/MCU shot/ angle which zoomed out and panned smoothly when following the movements of the character.
1B Pt.26a (00226)	1	0:06	This is the final scene of scene 1B which shows Zharkov and Armendariz leaving the Government military facility after hacking in to satellite and taking the on-board computer with them.	2	1	Yes	This scene was filmed effectively with precision as it focused on the perspective of the characters making their final move which concluded scene 1 dramatically which was a good way to include the title of the crime drama after woods. The body language and the dialogue of Zharkov was excellently executed as it represent the villain and the movements of Armendariz highlighted the personality of the character.
1B Pt.26b (00227)	2	0:04		2	2	Yes	This scene had the same filming and cinematic features than the first take but the only problem was that the dialogue of Zharkov and the movements of both characters was too quick which made the scene looked like it was rushed.
1B Pt.26c (00228)	3	0:05		2	2		Again this scene has the same filming and cinematic features than the other two takes where this time the movements was a much slower approach and that the dialogue of Zharkov sounded sarcastic which did not represent his dark and serious character.